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Natasha West's avatar

I truly hope you continue on with the store. It has already hooked me and I'm dying for more. I am in need of a good horror/thriller novel to read. Keep it coming 💜💜

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Notes from The Gate's avatar

I'm ready to go down, down down the rabbit hole and see what happens when I reach Burden.

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Ari B's avatar

"I can’t live my life afraid of everything" You most certainly can! I do every day! I really like the ending, down, down, down. It's spooky!

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Justina Revolution's avatar

I love this. Lex and Krista immediately capture my interest.

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Casey Carter's avatar

Oh this is so good I can’t wait for more!

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Kim Eberhard's avatar

I cannot wait for more!!!

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Stephanie R's avatar

Can’t wait to read more.

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Kartika's avatar

Waiting for more ❤️❤️❤️

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Brooke Sutton's avatar

Hey I don’t have an email can phone number work

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Amanda Lynn's avatar

As I sit here in Vegas with the worst wind storm in awhile. I hear the windows shaking and doors slamming shut imaging myself along side them.

I can't wait to hear more ❤

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Tyler Poole's avatar

LOVE this. 👀

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Violeta's avatar

I usually dont read fiction on here but this is rlly fun to read and also i feel like i could learn from u ur writing is descriptive but not overcharged with words if that makes sense. Luv it🤭❤️

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Disarticulated Press's avatar

I can feel it building! Cool stuff

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Haunter S. Tombstone's avatar

A new darker, grittier reboot of Gavity Falls

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Gabriel maier's avatar

The horror begins when he said "I am 17 and an adult". Being underage is more deadly than being arrogant in a horror story.

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Ernie Lee's avatar

Interesting beginning.

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James L Rickard's avatar

Just discovered you today. I know there's another installment. Do you have any idea how far it goes? (as you an tell, I haven't read Pt. 2)

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